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Daddy left for the bar,
Stealing away the the car,
Soon Mama put me to bed,
And kissed me on the head,
Daddy was still not home,
He left us all alone,

Daddy came home just after four,
Mama was angrier then ever before,
Daddy was so mad and drunk he left the house,
I listened in bed as quiet as a mouse,


Daddy wasn't home for breakfast,
And when lunch time came at last,
Daddy didnt show up,
Mama was quiet, sipping at a cup,

Daddy came home tonight,
His eyes looked out of sight,
Mama  pushed him away with all her might,
Daddy looked past the light,

Daddy took mama to the bedroom,
She screamed and there was a big boom,
Daddy walked out of the bedroom very tall,
I shrieked and ran down the hall,

Daddy caught me, I felt small,
Then he threw me against the wall,
He hit me and punched me,
My eyes hurt so bad I couldnt see,
Daddy stopped.

My name is Katie,
I am three,
And on this night my Daddy murdered me.
As you got from reading the poem its about child abuse, which is horrible. Its sopposed to be in more of a kid view but it goes for both. Its not the best but it gets the point out please comment!

(C) temarifan111

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Lexichae Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Alcoholics... 
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FiretrontheHedgehog Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This will sound stupid, but did this happen for real?
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tomatoeisafruit Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh gosh..... after reading this, I actually felt a jab of pain. O.o
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isi444 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
very, very nice work. But itīs rly sad ;-(
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rindigo7 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
That was so sad. My best friend's name is Katie, so naturally I freaked out when I read the last bit. Really nice work.
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TheEvilAngel724 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG POOR KATIE
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theonewithmanynames Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013
This is just....thank you so much....
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TreLore Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Intensely powerful and well written. It really toudhed my heart and made me choke up a bit
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viki12rocks Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Omg....i so hate child abuse.
That poor baby. :'(
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DreamsphereINC Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh my gosh.. This is so sad :(
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